Breakup letter
Oh my dear Chori
Dekh maine tera naam bhi bhula diya hai
Dil ke cirkuit se tera IC bhi hata diya hai
Ab to single bana ghoomta hoon
Orkut ke profile se committed bhi mita diya hai
Teri saheli ka profile pasand aa gaya hai
Uska chehra aab aankhon main sama gaya hai
Hot girls community main uski rating hai high
Uska figure hai uff, lifestyle hi-fi
Dekh saach saach kehta hoon
Mujhe tujme koi interest nahi
Jitne tere bajoo hain
Utna to mera waist nahi.
Waise bhi tu na mujhe
Na mere doston ko bhati thi
Jab bhi main date pe le jata
Tu bahut jyada khati thi.
Ab bas kar mera khoon peena
Mujhe bhi hai kuch pal jeena
Ab tera saath na de paonga
Tujhe chood ke main bhag jaonga
posted by nikhil @ 9:56 PM
9 Comments
9 Comments:
Hehe, I think I know where you got your muses from. Well, the poem as such is pretty good in the sense that it has lots of rhyming and has a metricated verses. But you do know that I do not appreciate the idea of break-ups. It is so sad that two person in love should ever get separated. But then when a better thing comes who would not want the better one in life.
A well written verses that expresses the human side of being unloved.
thts well written and quite funny..generally i skip the one's written in hindi but this one caught me to read till the end...
ramesh
Are you from one of the IIT's?
Lagta hain bahut hee vele ho aap intern main bilkul hamari tarah..Chalo kuch acha kaam to kar rahe ho unlike me..Carry on writing..all this 'CRAP'.
chal beta good piece of work after quiet a long time.I 'm tired of seeing all the modern arts u drew on walls.a relief for me finally :)
majja aaa gaya
yaar.....its nice
sach me bada achha likhe ho
:) Happy Birthday to your blog :)
belated hi sahi
pata hi nahi tha waise
abhi sanjay ke blog par tera comment padha ....
khair ... back to the standard ....
Best Wishes
Enjoy
amazing piece of writing.!!! kudos...
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